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In bitter night
on the trail
as tangled
as a human heart
and ugly-
a painting once
hung against
a blue black sky,
crookedly
compelling...
The smell
of thawing Moos
encouraged
by spring spirits -
wait! an animal
passed here -
not a man
for years
through the
gentle wind
and the
stinging tears...
A hero lies
buried
in that sinking
stinking swamp
of a century -
maybe more
has passed
at last...
Forgotten
man and
familes
who never
walk and
talk of
barricades
and battle
next to
dead men's hearts
rest here...

The bleary stars
twinkle
on and off
in rhythm
to my footfall -
look up, look down...
this is a town
of the dead
yet
spirits
hang
fast to
dreams -
it seems...
Thoughts after a walk through a cemetery with ruined memorials. Spring thaw and so many sights and sounds and impressions bring forth this scattered verse...
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58bluemarbles Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very beautiful text....
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014
Thank you so much! I really appreciate. :rose:
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58bluemarbles Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014
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58bluemarbles Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014
:frail::frail::frail:
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PrinzGwalchavad Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
Shakespeare was a deluded drunkard next to you. Sinceriously das ist uber impressive!!
Und gut luck mit nursery schule!
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
Herzlichen Dank fuer alles, mein netter Freund! :) :wave:
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013
I must be away more, if when I came you have published such beautiful poems. I love them.
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013
You are very kind. I appreciate! :iconheartblueplz:
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013
It's really a pleasure.
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013
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sewandrere Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Student Writer
Sehr gut getan!!! Loads of alliteration, recalls me of the Germanic metre, was it on purpose? Beautifull text ;)
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013
I must admit that it was not on purpose but my poetry lately has been pretty spontaneous. I SO appreciate you reading it. And thank you for being so kind.
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sewandrere Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student Writer
I saw it was :D You're most welcome darling ;)
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013
:rose:
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sewandrere Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Student Writer
:blowkiss:
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
:blowkiss: :rose:
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sewandrere Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Student Writer
:huggle: :love:
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
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WolfandMoon Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013
How did I miss this one? Well done!
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
Thankyou but I'm beginning to hate my writing.
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xLucariogalx Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmmm.... It's really good, I like it indeed.
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013
Thank you! Could you include it in the group?
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xLucariogalx Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmmm.... Ok!
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xLucariogalx Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmmm.... Ok!
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013
Thankyou! :)
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xLucariogalx Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
NP! ^^
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013
^^
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SuperSnappz Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful poem as always my friend :heart:
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013
Thankyou so much :D
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andrekosslick Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It is a painting out of spirits in your words. Ways fully of pictures. And tones of a forest of the thoughts on the bitter way of the night. Between flowers of dream and crosses of hopes. The swamp of the time swallows all in short trains of dead breath and is the birth of wood out of deep green water.
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013
Thank you very much, Andre, for your interpretation. I very much appreciate that you take the time to enjoy my poetry., you my wonderful artist guy. :rose:
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DasBlondeBiest Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
Very nice. This is how I felt last night!
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
I'm sorry I hope you feel better. lol. No, really, thank you so much.
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DasBlondeBiest Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
My first cold in ten years; I'm out of practice,lol!
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
Gute Besserung!
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DasBlondeBiest Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
Danke; I'm working on it!
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
:D
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LiniaElizabeth Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Beautiful
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
Thankyou very much! :)
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PhilipHarvey Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is a lovely poem Gudrun, I particularly like the last verse. :rose: :)
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
You are very kind. Thankyou so much! :rose:
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bewareofthesnail Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
So beautifully haunting! Wow!
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
You just made my day! Thank you so much!
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dreamingshadow18 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nicely written. It's very contemplative.
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
Oh I wanted to say how much I enjoyed your newest poem. And the reply by your friend was also awesome. :)
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
Thank you very much. :)
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