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Please remember me.
One word
One glance
One flower
from home.
When you
pass by,
leave something
of yourself
for me.
Bring music,
bring memories,
bring me
your youth!
Life is
as sweet
as a goodbye
kiss.
In memory of the passing of a dear friend
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beachlegs Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Great poem :)
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
Thank you very much. It was an emotional piece for me because it was about the loss of a family friend. Thank you so much for reading. :)
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beachlegs Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I am sorry for your loss :( It also reminded me of my brother who was a Soldier. We seem to have abit in common :)
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
Thank you. I guess that we do. :)
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dreamingshadow18 Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful. I'm sorry for your loss. This is a very strong tribute to them.
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner May 13, 2012
thanks for reading. I tried to write a tribute.
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Huks905 Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow.
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner May 12, 2012
Thanks! :D
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Suicide-Blonde-Stock Featured By Owner May 11, 2012   Digital Artist
This is wonderful..
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
Thank you!:heart:
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Suicide-Blonde-Stock Featured By Owner May 11, 2012   Digital Artist
My pleasure. :hug:
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:icongudrun355:
GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
:hug:
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NewMuffin Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice poem :)
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
Vielen Dank! :D
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andrekosslick Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Think every day of the dead! For only through your thought, it lives on. And every breath of your memory. An expensive further life is for the dead. Through your grace, it lives. And through your death, it dies the last death. Have no anxiety. If you think of the stiff majesty of the corpse. The picture will touch you. And it will construct a quiet monument in you. Do not forget. For first with the last memory, a person is removed from for always the universe.
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
Sorry to bother you but I just wanted you to know that I have included your caring reply along with my poem in a Mothers Day greeting to this young man's Mom. Your word were so inspiring that I thought it might honor him in a stronger fashion than my poem could. Just wanted you to know.And thank-you...
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andrekosslick Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My simply words?But many thank,that you give this ppor mother your wishes and help,dear feelful Gudrun.
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
Sometime your thoughts are like poetry and this instance, they were beautiful and deeply comforting.:butterfly:
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
Thank-you for your impressive and comforting words to my sad poem of the brave young soldier. You really touched me with your interpretation. Thank you so very much. :hug:
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andrekosslick Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You girl of the thinkful words.
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
you guy of the feelful heart.
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bewareofthesnail Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
Oh, this is so sweet! I love those last lines, so beautifully sad.
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
Thank you so much! Really, thanks! :hug:
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bewareofthesnail Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
no problem! :)
I think what I like about your poems (I have been reading a few) is that you capture perfectly all those hard to describe, complicated emotions in a really elegant way. Consider me a fan! :)
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
That is a great honor. Thanks. :)
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iamluli Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
Very nice, excellent poem :D
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
Thanks so much. And thanks for the fave!
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iamluli Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
Welcome :D
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
:D
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ScottiBug Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So beautiful... Your poems are so good!!
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
Thank you so much! :D :heart:
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callumsouth Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I am totally in love with this poem! It so simple yet so powerful! A very fitting tribute if I do say so myself, beautifully written.
-C
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
Oh, thank you so much for your kind comment. I just keep wishing I could have done better! Thank you again. :rose:
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callumsouth Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nooo it's beautiful as it is! Sometimes the best poems are the most simple and honest ones like this! <3
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
Thanks again.
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DasBlondeBiest Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
This just about made me cry!
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
The story is so sad that it took me time to really sit down and write it. Thank you for reading my poor tribute. And thank -you for the fave! You're very nice.
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Absolutely beautiful. I like how it's so simple yet powerful, especially the end.
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
Thanks so much! I really appreciate it! :rose:
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TheSoCalledPrincess Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Student General Artist
This Is Absolutely Beautiful.
It's Amazing, How Some Of Our Best Work Can Come From Such Sadness, And Pain.
Nonetheless, Grief Is A Blessing Within Itself.

Keep Up The Wonderful Work. ^^ :rose:
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
Thank you so much! Wish I could have written a better tribute.
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TheSoCalledPrincess Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Student General Artist
I Don't Believe It Gets Much Better Than That. :rose: I Promise, I Am No Flatterer. I Will Always Give My Honest Opinion, No Matter What. You Have My Word.

It Does Not Get Much Better Than This.
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
Oh, thank you so much!
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TheSoCalledPrincess Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Student General Artist
Don't Thank Me, Please. ^^ You Should Be Quite Proud Of Your Work.
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
Thank you again.
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TheSoCalledPrincess Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Student General Artist
No, Thank You. ^^
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StellaChii Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh wow so pretty, really moved me...
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
thank you. It took me months to write it because its kind of painful.
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StellaChii Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
welcome, i don't think i could ever write something this amazing, its so beautiful and sad :)
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