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There will always
be rivers
on this earth
in considering
the snow
when it dies -
crystal,
then fluidity
then mist
on the waters,
rising and falling
from the clouds -
to morph and sink
into the earth
for the earth
can not hold back
those tears
for long
from the river...
flowing, flowing
to the ocean
in salty agony...

For all must change
around you -
your family
will grow old -
your friends
will travel
and be lost
to you -
there will be
weddings and holidays,
memories so
sweet
that they hurt -
and bright, light
Christmas trees -
green lives,
sacrificed
for one day
in a warm house
with laughter...
All will be vorbei...
snow and fog
and clouds
on the horizon
of our uncertain,
frightening futures...
Why you can not
see the forest
any longer
than you have to
but you will
always feel
the river...
Spontaneous poetry written in the wee morning hours and inspired by the art of a friend who always understands my most obscure poetry. :iconandrekosslick:
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:iconddimitri16:
DDimitri16 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awesome
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:icongudrun355:
GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
Thank you very much, my friend! :happybounce:
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DDimitri16 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're most welcome, my friend:happybounce: 
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:icongudrun355:
GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014
:iconbluelaplz:
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DDimitri16 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Roses by DDimitri16  
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:icongudrun355:
GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014
:iconblueroseplz:
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DDimitri16 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Roses by DDimitri16  
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:iconprinzgwalchavad:
PrinzGwalchavad Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013
There will always
be tears
on this heart
in considering
the sorrow
when it dies -
crying,
then fidelity
then misery
on the tears,
raging and filtering
from the crimes -
to maim and scream
into the heart
for the heart
can not hold back
those tears
for long
from the rage...
filling, falling
to the orphans
in salty agony...
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:icondragonschest:
DragonsChest Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Professional Writer
Amazing poem, I read it three times today. Such beautiful imagery makes this a gem... :hug:
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:icongudrun355:
GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013
Thanks so much for this kind comment :hug: It's probably the only one I like that I wrote recently. I won't be posting any more here unless I decide to stay on DA. I really appreciate everything that you've done to encourage.
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:iconkay-march:
Kay-March Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013
the river flows as your words and thoughts... no need to say more.
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:icongudrun355:
GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013
Thank you. I like this poem - probably one of the few. I want to thank you for reading as well. :thanks:
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:iconkay-march:
Kay-March Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013
It was... no it is a true pleasure, reading it. I love how it sounds in my head, I love how the words fall into their place in the pace of writing and sound.
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:icongudrun355:
GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013
That makes me feel good when a great poet like you enjoys my verse. :) I mean it too.
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:iconkay-march:
Kay-March Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
Great, me?! Hehe!! That makes us 2, ok?
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:icongudrun355:
GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
OK but I do admire your verse.
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:iconkay-march:
Kay-March Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013
Thank you deeply. It's reciprocate.
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:icongudrun355:
GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013
You're welcome and thank YOU too! :iconasmaa-rabiaa:
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:iconsewandrere:
sewandrere Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Student Writer
Beautiful poem :D I see what you meant on [link]
Continue good poetry like that I love it :D :D
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:icongudrun355:
GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013
Oh, thanks so much. I'll try. Writing hasn't been easy lately. I'm glad that someone enjoyed it.
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sewandrere Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student Writer
I see that you posted one new poem^^ excellent it's great, such a really good writer you are ;)
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:icongudrun355:
GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013
I try. If I had more time, I'd be a happy poet.
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:iconsewandrere:
sewandrere Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Student Writer
Ah... time... that's hat we all need!!!
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LittleGreenMouse Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This is really lovely and uplifting :floating:
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:icongudrun355:
GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
Thank you so much! :heart:
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:iconlittlegreenmouse:
LittleGreenMouse Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
You are very welcome! :hug:
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:icongudrun355:
GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
:hug:
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brokengod--veins Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
hi there, awesome person! :hi:

I used your artwork title as a line for my poem! : )

Hope you won't mind! ^^

Have a nice day! :huggle:
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:icongudrun355:
GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013
I read your poem and it's very good.
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brokengod--veins Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oh my! ^^ Thanks so much! :huggle:
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:icongudrun355:
GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013
You're welcome :hug:
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dreamingshadow18 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're just like a friend of mine in that your choice of words strike chords of such strong emotion. I love this. It inspires me.
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:icongudrun355:
GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013
Thank you so much. I have to really work on my poetry because these spontaneous things aren't much of a challenge or craft.
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Speck2 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I really like it!!
Cindy
:heart: :rose:
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:icongudrun355:
GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013
Thank you. :rose:
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Speck2 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
So very welcome !!
Cindy
:heart: :hug:
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andrekosslick Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It is such an impressive poetic picture of the circulation of life. So water will melt and falls to ice and ice out of the clouds. The country fertilizes. Lets the river drink. And life swims like a tear on the current. You have created a beautiful landscape with your word painting,my sweet british lady.Thanks for this great honor.
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
Aww, Andre. Your interpretation is perfect. And no need to thank me. I've been enjoying your wonderful art for a year and it inspires me so much. Thank you for your comment and for liking your poem, for it trully belongs to you.
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andrekosslick Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You my dear poetress of the blue romantic.
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:icongudrun355:
GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013
:iconrosablu:
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andrekosslick Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You blue romantic rose,thankyou for your Wagner in Bayreuth gift.
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:icongudrun355:
GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013
No need to thank, you my talented friend Andre... :iconheartblueplz:
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andrekosslick Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Especielly on this thinkful memorie day of the 13.Februar 1883 in Venedig.
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013
:iconblackrose-7x: In memory of the Master...
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xLucariogalx Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Good indeed, I like how you compare nature to dark feelings cause nature is mostly asociated with beauty and that kind of stuff. Ah, yes, this kind of poems always tell truths, those rejected ones that just few can see because they survive to live the pain. Hmmm.... I would like to share with you other poems I wrote a bit long ago.
1) [link]
2) [link] (Just that this one is in spanish)
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:icongudrun355:
GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
Thank you very much for reading and your comment. Sure, I'll read your poems and let you know what I think. And thank you for accepting my poem into the group gallery. I appreciate so much! :)
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xLucariogalx Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome. This kind of art will always be acepted on my group, besides that this is really good in many ways.
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013
I just asked :iconarrowgirl26: to come and look at the group. I hope she does because she needs feedback on her poetry. I think she might be a little shy.
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xLucariogalx Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I think that can be ok, if she's shy it will just be thing of time. I will also try to talk to her.
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